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Critiques
Alright, this is a very nice piece here. I really like how you showed off Grind's emotions, as well as her stance. And you know I've always love the way you've shaded. I also really appreciate how much detail you put into the teeth, since usually people just make it a white space, or dashes. I also really like how most of your sketches gradually fade into a darker tone, instead of being all white. Is that from your scanner, or do you do that?
However, some of the proportions on this picture seem off, mostly in how the feet bend. I know that's for effect, but how it bends so far back, looks a bit weird, or disjointed rather. Also with how the right arm appears, I realize that her upper arm is larger than her lower arm (obviously), but the way it looks like while it's bending looks odd. Not that I'd have any reference to compare with to see if I'm right or not, but the way you drew it looks almost like she's wearing a glove. I'm also not quite sure if the way the ear turns is how it would actually be, but I don't know what to say to that, just pointing it out.
Thanks for reading, and I hope I didn't fail
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